| 1 | However, I would wellcome a new submission, where these issues are addressed and the shortcomings resolved. | |
| 2 | I started with Shandong Culture and Publication Company, where I was able to do some editing and rewriting. | |
| 3 | But Mr. Spielberg thought the revision was not as "humble" or "pure" as the original, Mr. Morgan said. | |
| 4 | When I revisited my writing some time later, it took another three months to go through my initial draft because by that time I had a job and I was trying to manage my editing and my job. |